The Promise by Teresa Driscoll (ARC)
Genre: Psychological Thriller
Read: 6th November 2018
Purchase: Amazon (pre-order)
(release date: 7th February 2019)
(release date: 7th February 2019)
★★★ 3.5 stars
I was given an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I am already a fan of Teresa Driscoll, having read her debut "I Am Watching You" and then "The Friend" just recently. So I was excited to read her latest thriller THE PROMISE. Though not my favourite of the three, I still enjoyed it and eagerly await her next book!
THE PROMISE is a slow-build, which does create the problem for some readers possibly losing interest. I did feel the story dragged out a little in parts while waiting for something to happen, but I didn't lose interest. I just got a little frustrated with "the promise" of what was to come and if it was ever going to get there. But once it did, it was unputdownable.
It begins with three young girls in Boarding School and what could only be assumed as a death which they then had to cover up. But the death of who? And why? This becomes the secret they now all share and vow never to tell. As the reader, we don't discover who it is or how she died until about halfway through, but there are a couple of subtle hints which I correctly guessed though that didn't dampen the story or it's impact.
Fast forward some 30 years and we see one of the friends Beth is happily married to Adam with two boys, Sam and Harry, and Sally is divorced from her unfaithful husband after a miscarriage which left her devastated. The third friend, Carol, is estranged from them both having gradually distanced herself over the years until no one knew how to contact her or where she even was. When Beth and Sally receive notice that the boarding school is about to be demolished, they begin to panic about the body they buried when they were 14 in the woods bordering the school would be discovered. They decide that they need to find Carol to discuss whether to break the promise they made all those years ago and reveal their secret. But where to start?
Beth and Sally engage private investigator Matthew Hill to find Carol beginning with her mother Deborah, which seems to take up an inordinate amount of time than really necessary. As the focus is primarily on finding Carol not her mother that search should be detailed a little shorter. When they do make contact with Carol, it is hard to believe that she was once their best friend, her estrangement is so palpable.
Then strange things begin to happen. Someone knows about their secret and is threatening Beth and Sally into silence. A Facebook message. A phone call to Beth's sons' school. And then the ultimate threat - a hit and run resulting in Adam being seriously injured and left for dead. Who knows about their secret? Beth then decides to break their promise and tell Adam everything...even if means losing him and the boys.
Beth also wants to tell Matthew everything but Sally is reluctant. But Matthew can't help them unless they are completely honest with him.
THE PROMISE is told predominantly from Beth's POV - both in the present and the past - with several chapters from Carol as diary entries, that clearly begin to show her instability - as well as a handful of chapters from Matthew's perspective. I feel that his input could have been more involved as Beth seemed to do most of the investigating whilst Matthew instead became a love interest for Sally. I didn't have a problem with Matthew and Sally's relationship but I felt as a PI he should have been doing more otherwise his involvement was a little redundant. Granted, he did find Deborah but it seemed as though Beth did the rest and he merely tagged along.
The story was really slow building and I felt it could have moved faster. By the time it reaches the point the secret is revealed, I feel the less patient reader will have lost interest. The secret itself is a little disappointing as while it is something 14 year old girls would definitely want to keep secret, I couldn't decide whether I WAS disappointed in it or not. Because it did feel a little anti-climatic on that point.
However, the real climax came when they returned to the old boarding school to ascertain whether the remains would be disturbed in the demolishing of the old convent. I didn't see that coming - and I foresee many twists - so that was an interesting touch.
As Carol is a major part of this story, I felt her "story" as such could have been more devled into as some parts of the story she appeared completely fine whilst at others somewhat disturbed. It is clear from her diary entries that she has mental health issues that have manifested over time so a little more focus on her "story" would have helped the story flow together more seamlessly, rather than disjointed. I couldn't connect with Carol's character at all as she felt too "distant" from the entire story despite being a major player. However, when the entire story is revealed at the end it does make sense, but otherwise she felt a disjointed part that we couldn't reconcile with the rest of the story.
Also, the dispute between Beth and Sally over Sally's romantic involvement with Matthew does not reconcile with their relationship. Their 30 year long friendship through every possible thing and yet they stop speaking because Sally is involved with Matthew. Yes, it may seem a little unethical due to him being hired by them, but to stop speaking? And then Beth falls into a deep depression and Sally doesn't bother to call or see her or offer support? Only when Beth calls in tears after Adam's accident does Sally run to her side, and the whole "non-speaking because of the romance with Matthew" is brushed aside as not important and barely visited again. Their unwillingness to discuss it as friends of 30+ years doesn't seem realistic.
One thing I must point out is Matthew's involvement in the story which I found a nice touch. As I was reading his "backstory" I felt it sounded somewhat familiar, and then when a former colleague's name was mentioned a light-bulb went on. The fact he was a former cop and then his backstory with the child rang a bell with me as being somewhat familiar. For those who have read "I Am Watching You", you would have already met Matthew as he is the private investigator Ella hired. Then when I flicked through "I Am Watching You" to one of "Matthew's" chapters I discover the mention of his wife Sally and their daughter. So in effect, THE PROMISE is in prequel to "I Am Watching You" since he meets Sally in this book and they are already married in the debut. I just felt it was a nice touch to revisit Matthew, and I hope he pops up in other stories from time to time.
Overall, it was disappointing after Driscoll's other unputdownable thrillers, as I would have thought THE PROMISE would hold a little more promise. Although the pace was a bit slow to start with by the end I couldn't put it down. But in all, THE PROMISE is still a decent book (albeit with some flaws) but still a compelling read.
Thanks to #TeresaDriscoll, #NetGalley and the publishers for an advanced reader's copy of #ThePromise in exchange for an honest review.
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